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Analyse how the strengths and/or weaknesses of a character reinforced a key idea

The novel, The Kite Runner, by Khaled Hosseini, tells the story of an Afghan boy named Amir. Amir constantly finds himself in traumatic situations, however, is always rescued by his servant and only ‘friend’, Hassan. One day the roles were reversed when Hassan was sexually assaulted by the town bullies. Amir had the opportunity to be the hero for once but didn’t and this haunted him for the next 26 years of his life. During moments in this text, Hosseini gives us insight into Amir’s inner strengths and weaknesses including acceptance, selfishness and courage. Through these traits, we can see that what Amir wants most is to feel redeemed from the guilt that his younger self caused. Khaled Hosseini uses Amir’s strengths and weaknesses to show that there are many layers for one to feel redeemed which include that there it is a journey to find redemption, redemption must be faced head-on, and to feel it you must feel internally balanced.

Redemption does not happen instantly. It takes the strength of accepting why you need it and realising it involves a long journey to gain. Acceptance means that an individual is willing to tolerate and work with not against a difficult situation. Amir does not develop this trait of acceptance for the 26 years he needs it most but when he finally does his life changes for the good. The Kite Runner opens the book with a flash-forward of Amir reflecting on his life. He was walking through Golden Gate Park when an old friend Rahim Khan called and offered a chance to make amends with his past. Amir knew he would have to take this proposal when he acknowledges, “I knew it wasn’t Rahim Khan on the line. It was my past of unatoned sins.” This phone line connecting Amir back to Kabul is not seen, it is invisible just hanging above him. However, it is still there, just like his undealt with sins that are constantly hanging over Amir without being seen. Taking this offer means that Amir is finally showing the strength of acceptance. Accepting that earning redemption means he has to begin this journey sometime, somewhere and that is now. Amir furtherly embraces acceptance when he states “The past claws its way out. Looking back now, I realize I have been peeking into that deserted alleyway for the past twenty-six years.” He has finally realised that this painful memory that he has been timidly but frequently ‘peeking’ at is there because he is choosing to keep doing so. It is highlighting that by continuing to look inside the alleyway, Amir is never going to feel redeemed in himself. When Amir recognises these factors in the first chapter of the book and chooses to use the strength of accepting, it opens him and the audience up to the theme of redemption. Hosseini uses Amirs newly gained strength of acceptance to illustrate the idea that redemption is not just handed over to someone in need of the feeling. It takes accepting the fact of the sin then accepting that you actually have to take a journey to find it. The purpose Khaled Hosseini is trying to communicate to his readers is the fact that it may take as long as 26 years, but by acknowledging you have to take this one step or that one opportunity, it brings you onto the road of redemption.

When pushing something out of sight, it does not necessarily mean out of mind when it comes to feeling redeemed. Doing this is simply selfish. For Amir selfishness is a weakness he has carried throughout the entire novel. Although this was elevated after Hassan was sexually assaulted. Amir did not know how to feel or what to do. Selfishness took over him when he could not stand to look at Hassan anymore, driving Amir to frame him. He planted his new watch and birthday money under Hassan’s bed then told Baba it was Hassan. This lead to Hassan and his father leaving. During this scene, Amir states, “I lifted Hassan’s mattress and planted my new watch and a handful of Afghani bills under it…then I knocked on Baba’s door and told what I hoped would be the last in a long line of shameful lies.” Amir was doing whatever it took to get the feeling of redemption he so desperately craved. To him, it did not matter how selfish it was, he was just trying to cover up his own mistakes because he thinks this will give him the feeling of being redeemed. His weakness of selfishness develops the idea redemption further when Amir thinks “A part of me was glad. Glad that this would all be over with soon.” This portrays that it did not matter to Amir that he had just betrayed his only friend, his selfishness meant that the only thing that mattered was that he thought would finally feel redeemed. Through Amir’s selfishness, Hosseini reinforces the idea of redemption. That someone could do something so wrong without acknowledging that it could affect anyone but themselves. Amir pushed Hassan away for selfish reasons, although after this Amir does not feel any better than he did before. It proves that the feeling of redemption cannot be felt by pushing something to somewhere you cannot see. Like said before out of site does not mean out of mind. The author does this to make us understand that hiding your guilt will not make you feel any better. It takes standing up to the problem head-on because, in the eyes of redemption, selfishness will get an individual nowhere. The whole idea of it is to do something for the person you have done wrong.

The feeling of redemption is only felt when you be courageous by making the leap to feeling equal with your sin. Courage is a strength because you are acting in spite of the danger and being brave. Amir does not develop this trait early on in the book since he is the one constantly being stood up for. However, the day he chooses to fight for Sohrab, Amir finally develops this strength of being courageous. Amir put aside what could happen to him for once and fought because he knew this was how he was going to get Sohrab back and he was going to do it no matter what. During the fight, Amir thinks to himself, “My body was broken- just how badly I wouldn’t find out until later- but I felt healed. Healed at last. I laughed.” This demonstrates that even though Amir was so physically beaten and almost at death point, he felt so redeemed that it was funny. Amir believes that the result from his act of courage was what he deserved because he finally feels internally equal to what he did 26 years earlier. He then goes onto thinking, “What was so funny was that, for the first time since the winter of 1975, I felt at peace. I laughed because I saw that, in some hidden nook in a corner of my mind, I’d even been looking forward to this.” As much as Amir thought his sins were in the past and that he had moved on, they were always there ‘hidden’ in the back of his mind. He now knows that finding the courage in himself to try to feel balanced means that you will feel redeemed. Hosseini reinforces the idea that you have to act up and be brave to feel equal to what you have done. Redemption comes as a result of this because it is an internal feeling. The value Hosseini adds makes the audience recognise that an individual could wait a lifetime to try and have this feeling of redemption but at the end of the day, all it takes is the courage to stand up and make yourself feel balanced however that may be.

The idea of redemption is explored throughout The Kite Runner through Amir’s strengths and weaknesses. Inside the novel, he gains the trait of acceptance, obtains his selfishness but grows to become courageous. Within these, the audience comes to recognise key ideas of redemption. The author makes us understand that it takes a journey to find redemption as it does not just come to anyone at any time, and you have to accept that it will be a long road ahead. We also come to the understanding that the craving for the feeling can take over an individual, causing them to make heartless decisions that will only benefit themselves. Finally, the fact that redemption is an internal feeling, meaning that in order to feel it, you have to feel balanced to what is making you feel this way. Hosseini communicating these ideas makes us as an audience understand how these traits can develop the idea of redemption further. We come to see that there is a lot more to redemption than what meets the human eye. Readers can use Amir’s journey of how his different characteristics portrayed different ideas within redemption to reflect on our own times in need of the feeling.

2 Comments

  1. Hi Gerogia,

    You have made a good start with this essay! Nice progress.

    A few things to think about:

    – Be sure that you don’t rely on the plot details too much when setting up the context for your analysis. You need to remeber that it isn’t the event that you are focusing on but rather the strenght/weakness that is being displayed.

    – You have given yourself good advice about the wider ideas. I agree, you need to expand on these. That ‘Y’ section of your paragraph is vital in this essay as it is tied directly to the part of the question that asks you to discuss the key idea that is being reinforced. Make sure you reflect on the author’s purpose alongside this.

    – Read this work out loud to yourself. At times, you have made vocabulary choices which don’t clearly communicate your ideas. This could be becuase you have misused a verb or prepostion and so the idea comes across a little clumsy. Read your work out loud to yourself so you can ‘hear’ how you are presenting things.

    Mrs. P

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  2. Hello Georgia,

    You have put yourself in a good position to enter the final stages of this assessment. You will have a lot of time to edit your work for both writing accuracy and ideas.

    Look back at my comments about the plot, especially in relation to your introduction. You rely too heavily on the plot details at times.

    Make sure each of your sentences connect and give rise to each other. Using prepositons and connective phrases will help you to better highlight the realtionship between ideas and sentences.

    Keep asking yourself ‘why’- why is this true? Why is this of value to the reader? Why does this quote highlight that strength/weakness? Some of your ideas could be expanded on a little more.

    Make sure you re-read and act on my feedback about editing and accuracy. You still have errors in this piece that hamper the clear communication of your ideas.

    Mrs. P

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